Final essay


 I read many article of other classmates. I choose 3 articles. First choice, KimJongSu's article is 'Woman in Australia killed by cheap phone charger'. I am interested about this article, because I was shocked by that our phone charger can change dangerous thing. Second choice, KimKyungJae's article is 'Video game industry is Finland's rising star'. I was interested this article, that's my hobby. Third choice, HeoJeHyeok's article is 'North Korea has reportedly banned Choco Pies'. When I was due to army, I heard about North Korea a lot. I have a many interest about North Korea. These three articles caught my attention because I am related to them.

 First, when I saw title that 'Woman in Australia killed by cheap phone charger', I was shocked and I saw my phone charger. I was interested about that 'Can my phone charger kill me?'. Therefore, I choose this article. According to this article, Woman was found in death burned on her chest and ears by using mobile phone with headphone in north. The cause of accident is supposed for her to use the phone connected to unapproved cheap USB style charger. And, this article advised us against using your phone during charging it and using unapproved charger. According to opinion of KimJongSu, because of problem about stability of lithium ion battery of cell phone, when the device is mis-connected to charger, explosion or electrocution can occur unexpectedly. Particularly, although unauthorized charger is cheap, it can take your life if you are careless. So we should be more careful about using phone. I have an experience using my cell phone while it is charging too. If I didn't see this article, maybe I will continue using my phone while it is charging. Fortunately, I saw this article. I will use my phone following his opinion. I agree his opinion.

 Second, when I saw title that 'Video game industry is Finland's rising star', I was interested this video game's popularity in other countries. It is reason of my choice. According to this article, the video game and software industry is Finland's leading market grower. There is a lot of video game-related know-how in Finland, and the buzz has infected the industry as a whole. KimKyungJae told me. In Korea, government regard game as a kind of drugs saying that people cannot control themselves about gaming. But, he think, game isn't like a kind of drugs. Korean government should realize the truth about game, stop obstructing doing it, do not hinder this golden market. I agree his opinion. I was playing the game three hours a day at middle school. But, I was not playing the game at high school. Game isn't a kind of drugs. This is general hobby. I countenance his opinion.

 Third, I had a heard that North Korea's Choco Pies. But this article's title told me that 'North Korea has reportedly banned Choco Pies'. I wonder why North Korea has banned. According to this article, North Korea banned Chocopies. In 2004 one of South Korea Company in North Korea could hire many workers and give them Chocopies as a gift. Chocopies are spreading widely now and because of that North Korea worried about spreading South Korean culture. Some people sold it illegally. To prevent it, North Korea made a rumor that is 'South Korea added weird substances'. According to HeoJeHyeok's opinion, he thinks this article shows the most weakness part of North Korea. They have forced citizens to watch and listen only about Kim family. People can't enjoy their life. He heard about North Korean when he was in military from North Korea defector. They are trying to live and eat something every day. Every day is challenge to them. They can't do what they really want. He feels compassion to North Korean. I think, North Korea go to wrong direction. This ban isn't fundamental solution, they must to agonize about people in North Korea can feel happy. I feel compassion too since when I was in army. I think same feeling to North Korea with JeHyeok.

 I have selected these three articles. 'Woman in Australia killed by cheap phone charger', 'Video game industry is Finland's rising star', and 'North Korea has reportedly banned Choco Pies'. These articles are related my life. I have a phone charger, I like a video game, and I am in South Korea relating North Korea. I have new information; I am reminded about my thinking for these topics. I find that students in class have a similar opinion. My opinion is same on student's opinion about mostly topic.


Source

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HeoJeHyeok's blog <URL> http://jaehyeok2014.blogspot.kr/p/blog-project-3_25.html
3b
Terrence McCoy "North Korea has reportedly banned Choco Pies" The washingtonpost. 01 July 2014. Web 10 July 2014
<URL> http://www.washingtonpost.com/news/morning-mix/wp/2014/07/01/north-korea-has-reportedly-banned-choco-pies/>

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1b
By AFP, "Woman in Australia killed by cheap phone charger" The Telegraph, 27 Jun 2014, web 10 July 2014
<URL>http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/australiaandthepacific/australia/10929662/Woman-in-Australia-killed-by-cheap-phone-charger.html

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"Video game industry is Finland's rising star" yle N.p., 27 June 2014. Web. 10 July 2014
<URL>http://yle.fi/uutiset/video_game_industry_is_finlands_rising_star/7323502/

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